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Saturday, October 14, 2023

How I see the Gmod canon as working.

 


Hello everyone, I know I haven't used this site in a while but for the upcoming things that I'm going to be doing (i.e. some power scaling and respect threads), I thought I'd use this blog to post them.


So Gmod Canon is one of the most convoluted, confusing and elusive cannons in all of fiction, The Gmod cannon is hard to really define.


So hard that some would argue that it technically doesn't exist, which is understandable but personally, I can definitely see one existing although very loosely and quite confusing.


Ultimately, from my perspective the Gmod Canon consists of three major layers of sorts.


The foundational layer which is the game itself, gameplay elements, maps, features, functions, menu screen backgrounds and so on.


The playerbase layer, which is everything The playerbase adds, develops or does in Garry's mod, ranging from things like add-ons, let's play videos and even Just players playing the game in whatever game mode they play the game in.


And then finally the creative layer, which consists of various creative works that spawned from GMod, particularly of a narrative nature, This includes movies, shows and series, standalone videos, comics and the like.


Now the thing is, each of these layers kind of form and ouroboros with each other, The gameplay informs how the players play, How the players play often inspires elements of the creative works (or the creative works as a whole), the creative works inspire the developers of the game to include nods, homages and/or changes to the game in updates  which reference these creative works, and round and round it goes.


Granted it's not always in that order but a lot of the time it is, and there's plenty of examples of this happening.


Like how the original gameplay of Gmod led to the rise and existence of the Mingebags due to how certain players would play the game paired with a specific glitch that existed early on, specifically for people using the Dr kleiner player model,

which eventually inspired the creative work War Of The Servers, 

which then rounded back and has been repeatedly homaged and reference by the official GMod development team through menu screen backgrounds and in-game elements.

This on top of the community or playerbase consistently homaging War of the Servers and the Mingebags through add-ons, language and even a new series taking place during The War Of The Servers, The Survivor of All.


So basically gmod's canon is a very very loose one, that is informed mainly by the original, foundational game, and it's developers and what they add to the game, as well as the community around the game that can be split up into two different although interconnected sections, (The playerbase and the creative works respectively).


And ultimately this is just the way I interpret it and see the continuity, especially since there's so much overlap between The three layers I mentioned before.


I can understand why some may disagree with this interpretation and I'm not entirely sure in it myself, but there is evidence of something like this existing for Gmod and this is the best way I can explain it at the current moment.


Now why did I decide to explain this, Well because it informs how I am probably going to be doing an upcoming project.


That of course being a series of "respect threads" where I do my best to scale various Gmod characters, And how I interpret how the continuity of Gmod works will inform how I scale some of these characters (to a degree).


This is especially since there are some characters who appear in videos, comics etc, with these works oftentimes all being made by multiple different creators, with all of these appearances being considered canon by a lot of fans.


For example, Dr Hax who although originally created an only appearing in videos by dasboschit, has appeared In videos not made by him (Like some videos from kitty0706 and even a few official Gmod main menu backgrounds), but these appearances are still considered canonical by fans and the community/playerbase, despite again the original creator of Dr Hax not being involved in some, if not quite a few of these projects.


And even though I feel this way, that the Gmod Canon is fast and loose, I will do my best in these threads to start out with material made by the original creator of a character (If there is one) before going into "expanded media" made by others, But in my scaling I will be including expanded media due to again how loose and fluidic gmod's overall Canon is in my opinion, Also it's a bit more fun.


I'm hoping the next time I post will be my first respect thread which was decided by the folks on Twitter to be none other than be protagonist of the popular half-life fan comic in Gmod comic Concerned, none other than the shovel wielding chaos causing idiot of dubious morality, Gordon Frohmen



(I do not own any of the images presented here and they belong to their respective creators/owners)

Sunday, June 4, 2023

Zeb Zuse (character bio)

 

Art by William H.D. Koerner
Character originally created by 
William H.D. Koerner

Inhabitant of the Goldaverse, Zeb Zuse was a circus bear, born to a dancing bear mother who promptly rejected the meek cub, and before the small thing was disposed of by the circus he belonged to, them seeing the little thing as to much a burden to keep, he was saved by a young boy from a different circus, who bought the cub (or more so convinced his uncle to buy the cub for him) and started raising it as if it was his own son.

This boy being Hugo Hercules Hill, future founding member of The Heroics, Hugo would name the cub Zebediah, and the two quickly became like father and son, as the skinny cub latched onto Hugo as a parent.

Another surprisingly quick thing to happen was the baby bear growing, as in a manner of a week Zebediah was the size of a full grown bear, and by a month he was big enough to put an elephant to shame, and this growth was good news for Hugo but more so Hugo's uncle, Urso "Url" Hill who ran the Hill Family Circus, and had a decent bit of money riding on this bear being a good attraction, and as an addition to Hugo's act, it could work, the act already having one animal.

That of course being the Tiger of his brother the Handyman, so adding a bear to it would make the whole "3 super strongmen" act even more interesting.

And eventually despite his fragile beginnings, Zebediah proved himself to be a mighty performer with his partners and surrogate family, and even went on to prove himself to be a hero on one chaos filled night.

The scene was a rainy night in the big top, the crowd panicking as an elephant rampaged, the elephant panicking itself, so Zebediah knowing both sides weren't in the wrong he found a solution, a solution to the benefit of everyone and detriment to none, Zebediah, took a deep breath, and roared as loud as he could.

Zebadiah did this and startled the elephant still, stopping it's rampage while also causing the panicking crowd to go quiet and scared stiff, allowing the circus workers to get a handle on the situation, but the point is Zebediah saved the day thanks to a roar so loud that it cracked like thunder, and did so with no casualties or loss of life.

And so Hugo, being so proud of his boy, gave Zebediah a nickname, Zeb Zeus, And the two alongside Hugo's brother's, Handyman, his Tiger and Samson the strongman, all continued performing at the circus, doing amazing feats of strength.

For example, for one of their duo acts Hugo, the 6 ft 11 giant would get into a bit of a wrestle with the even larger Zeb in public exhibitions, to astonish and amaze quite consistently, with the two's absolute immense physical strength on full display.

However eventually came the day where Hugo would finally leave the circus, in order to pursue a greater adventure and answer a calling He had been feeling for a while, while Zeb ended up staying at the circus, continuing to be a part of the strong man act with handyman, his tiger and Samson.

Now this wasn't because Hugo didn't want to take Zeb with him, but Hugo was afraid that in any other context Zeb would be hunted, attacked or killed do to his strange paranormal nature, and Hugo couldn't be sure he was with the bear 24/7 to help protect Zeb from threats the bear couldn't deal with alone, with Hugo ultimately feeling that if he was going to keep the giant bear safe, he'd need a big property and to train the bear.

So Hugo made a promise to his first son that one day he'd be back and bring Zeb home to live with him, on a big spread all their own.

And Hugo of course kept this promise, although not after some hardship, with this fulfillment happening shortly after the Martian invasion, The disbanding of the heroics, and Hugo adopting his biological nephews due to his brother dying, although from this last tragedy Hugo ended up inheriting his bio brother's massive wealth, and using a small part of this inheritance Hugo was able to afford to buy a large piece of property for his quickly growing family.

This piece of property in particular being mostly a untouched forested area, funnily enough on this property one of the games that Hugo would play with Zeb would be one the two called Hunter, Hugo would dress up as a hunter, and Zeb would go out in the forest and hide, with the two simultaneously tracking each other, with the end goal being to surprise attack the other and then win a wrastling match.

Although Hugo would win most of these encounters, leaving Zeb a bit sour but also determined, always ending up learning from his mistakes, This all according to Hugo's plan, as Hugo would use this game to help train his bear boy how to properly fight for himself and deal with potential poachers, and other such threats that could end up on their property.

Now the property was huge and because of that, Zeb wasn't the only family Hugo had living there, as Zeb quickly made for a fascinating addition to Hugo's now strange, growing and complex immediate family, that family at the beginning being Zeb alongside his new brothers, The man known in the papers as the Gladiator, Hugo Danner, as well as Bart and Dave Hill.

All of which Zeb treated as little brothers and was fiercely protective of, although he and Danner would end up having a bit more to their relationship as they manage to foster a sibling rivalry between each other, often competing in tests of strength and even working with each other on occasion, most notably teaming up to save and protect their younger siblings and family members from a group of cyborg goons, sent by the mad scientist Dr Maxwell Flash.

Zeb would end up living for an abnormally long time for a bear, however he was the first child of Hugo to die, and luckily it was of natural causes, this happening sometime before the coming of the calamity The Martians predicted, however Zeb's spirit still lingered and would lend his thunderous power to those in the family who needed it, including Hugo who had a unbreakable connection to his bear boy.

The Ghostly bear and first of Hugo's sons would end up staying loyal to Hugo, till the elder strongman's very end, at least on the physical coil, as The Bear allowed his father to access the totality of the phantom Ursa's ghostly and higher dimensional power, helping Hugo overcome a great and hungry evil threatening the world during this calamity.

Although this action would ultimately add to a great cost.

However, I think that story is best left to be told as a proper tale in and of itself rather than described in a bio such as this.


Some of his notable adventures include
  • Hugo Hercules: The Original Comics
  • The 3 Super Strongmen
  • Hugo Hercules: The Walk About Years 
  • The Heroics: The Klan that Hates
  • The Heroics: The Martian Calamity
  • The Gladiator: The Monster's of Maxwell Flash 
  • The Gladiator: Now it's Personal
  • Zeb Zuse: The Monsters of Dr Moreau
  • The Gladiator/Her Highness: Entwined Across Time and Space
  • Aciesers: The Golden Finale, The Home Front
  • Aciesers: The Silver Generation
  • The Masteroid Calamity
  • Legionary Ursa: Son of the Gladiator 


(Note, Zeb is a character of my creation with loose basis in the original Hugo Hercules comics)

Saturday, May 6, 2023

The Heroics (Team Bio)



The Heroics were the first modern superhero team of the goldaverse, with this being the case for practically all it's many timelines.

The group formed in 1906 after a troubling discovery made by the heroic duo of the Madame Madcap Twins, Doris and Dorcas Darcan.

With the twins, after they tracked down the final member of their father's old gang, discovered he was now working for a truly dark cabal of the underworlds most putrid figures.

Amongst its ranks included such imposing figures as Zigomar, Fantomas, Lupin, an older H.H. Holmes, Doctor Moreau, a monstrous man later revealed to be Wilbur Whateley and at the head of this rounded table of revulsion a shadowed figure whose stench was rotten and aura overwhelming.

Needless to say, the sisters observing this nefarious group from a distance were intimidated and did not pursue any kind of attack, instead they retreated to their home and base of operations and began to ponder about what to do, they needed to deal with the situation but could not do it alone, And thus hatched the idea.

"If these villains had assembled into a group, then we should also have a group of heroes to fight against them".

The two quickly got to work researching, combing through countless newspapers, pamphlets and pulp books from all around the country and even the world for potential information on heroes who could be a part of this team, candidates for recruitment to what would later be referred to as the first group of superheroes ever assembled.

Eventually, after a week of near non-stop research, they found 6 individuals they thought to be perfect for this coalition of counter-conquest.

The two quickly got to work, going out and recruiting these heroes from across the world, them splitting up and under the guise of Madame Madcap, inspiring mystery and intrigue in each of these individuals while also giving each a letter.

This letter informing the candidate of a potential threat not only to themselves and their loved ones but to the world at large, and in order to stop it they'd need to head to a specific address in the US on a specific day.

And so the twins quickly reconvened at the address provided in the letter, and waited until the day came, hoping, praying that each of these heroes would heed their letter of warning and come to the address.

With their prayers thankfully being answered as each of them, one by one, began to arrive.

  • Hugo Hercules: A Melungeon strongman and towering gentle giant, He caught the twins attention with the newspaper reports of his incredible displays of strength speed and overall power, ranging from out muscling an elephant to even kicking a house a half mile on accident, His apparent connections to the strongest cowboy to ever live also made him a individual of major interest to the two
  • Sherlock Holmes: some call him the world's greatest detective, none more vocal about this claim than himself, the good detective Holmes at this point had just rejuvenated himself not more than a few years before after an adventure with his American counterpart, with them discovering a bottle containing water from the fountain of youth, giving both men more time on this mortal coil, however he spent these past few years in somewhat a miserable state soon regretting his decision to prolonged his life, but the twins being fans of the old detective of course invited him to the party
  • Nick Carter: some call him the world's greatest detective, none more vocal about this claim than himself, the good detective Carter at this point had just rejuvenated himself not more than a few years before after an adventure with his English counterpart, with them discovering a bottle containing water from the fountain of youth, giving both men more time on this mortal coil, Carter using the last few years to his benefit, making the most of them, continuing his heroic exploits with much enthusiasm, although the twins weren't as familiar with Carter, they soon found themselves admiring the man and gave him a letter as well
  • Astro: The Master of Mysteries name had gone far and wide, with him alongside his assistant and fiance Veleska, compiling and editing together his journal entries that dealt with some of his most notable cases, into a best selling memoir, him also at this point having just gone through a life-changing event which left the former fake magician with rediscovered and very real magical abilities, The Master of Mystery also being a master of marketing himself it seemed had won over the twins making him there go to magic man
  • The Nyctalope: The night creature and first of a new kind of hero, one of flesh and metal, brought back from the brink not by magic but science, The Nyctalope had made a splash in France as well as across the world, with him going on plenty a fantastical adventures that would end up getting recorded in newspaper and cheap pulp adventure novels, and the twins wanting to cover their bases and seeing the Nyctalope as their man of science they invited him to the table as well
  • Spring Heeled Jack: London's patron spirit of chaos had made quite a name for himself over the few hundred years he'd been active, however unbeknownst to the twins there were multiple individuals who had taken the Spring Heeled Jack persona over the years, Also little did the twins know that the one they recruited was none other than the original mad jumper, Knowing the chaotic mind of Jack and how the people they were going to deal with weren't exactly the sanest themselves, along with knowing that Jack more often than not fought for good according to the papers they had read, made him a no-brainer when it came to someone to add to the team, him having a real understanding of the mind of a madman
Now with all the players in the game and at the starting line so to speak, the twins made their presents known to The assembled Heroes, and after some bickering between the massive egos and old rivals/friends, Holmes and Carter the team learned of the threat and bore witness to photos taken by the Madcap Twins.

Photos showing the insidious individuals at the round table of evil, and as the heroes looked at these photos, Holmes took particular note of the cloaked head of this gruesome group, something seemed, familiar about him, but that would be impossible, right?...

However this thought was interrupted by a surprise attacked, Lupin alongside some goons rushed the group of heroes causing a brawl to break out, after which the heroes agreed to work together and quickly began to unravel this mystery and fight the forces of evil every step of the way.

And eventually using their various skills and talents, they successfully stopped this team of evil and ended up saving the world from a hollow apocalypse and prehistoric pandemonium.

Due to the success of the group, and how public the climax was to this inaugural adventure, they were known and dubbed by the papers as the fantastic team of "superheroes" The Heroics, and made into even bigger icons than they already were with parades, statues, the whole nine yards.

This first adventure would of course lead to the team all becoming friends who only grew closer as time went on, them all eventually going on a new adventure against evil every couple years.

Probably one of the most notable of these future adventures is the Case Of Caligari & The House Of Madness, in which they got their first and only major and permanent addition to the team, in the form of the young master of disguise, Judex, The Judge.

Eventually though, in 1922 the group would have their final proper adventure together, when they dealt with the bi universal Martian invasion, that little did they know was also happening simultaneously in the reflective universe of their sister multiverse, that being the Diamoverse.

With the Martians defeat coming with a foreboding warning, that in some way this invasion was done as an act of desperation by these martians, in order to help build an army for the coming of the grand destroyer, the embodiment of all encompassing negativity.

Most members present for the Martians dying words would end up going to the grave with them gnawing at the back of their minds, say for Hugo Hercules and Spring Heeled Jack, Hugo being the last surviving mortal member of The Heroics, saw what the Martian warned of come to pass, but also saw the generations of Heroes he and his team help inspire fight off and win against this grand evil, and Jack due to his immortal nature actually participated in the conflict.

And although their 1922 exploit was their last major huraw, the team would semi reunite during the final battle of World War II, where they alongside other elderly as well as young heroes, who were left behind to guard the homefront of the US, would end up fighting off an army of robots sent by the final surviving head of the Axis powers and living in bodyment of bigotry and hatred itself, The horrifying and ever evil, Claw.

But that is a story for another day and article.


They're notable adventures include
  • The Heroics: The Fight for Good 
  • The Heroics: The Klan that Hates 
  • The Heroics: The Case Of Caligari & The House Of Madness
  • The Heroics: The Martian Calamity
  • Aciesers: The Golden Finale, The Home Front



Tuesday, May 2, 2023

SUPERSTUCK (story idea and brief synopsis)

 


A long time ago there was a world under siege by oblivion, And hoping to save their first child this world's greatest hero and his teammates decide to send this newborn on a spaceship towards a whole in the fabric of reality, This fissure from brief investigation seems to lead not only to a place outside their universe but to an existence beyond their multiverse.

Setting up automated systems the team of heroes leave the newborn in a rocket and go to try and fight this oblivion and hopes of winning and reclaiming their slowly disappearing universe, only to end up failing, with only one of the team's members escaping alive and being able to retreat to the spaceship before it launches into the fissure and they go beyond what they know to be beyond.

However after they enter this new multiverse's temporal stream and begin adapting to this existence our last hero is met by their now dead world's greatest villain, who surprisingly had nothing to do with the death of their reality and was also seeking to leave their plane of existence.

Needless to say an epic fight breaks out resulting in both villain and hero falling into the new universal timestream and being spit out at random points in both time and space, with the ship adapting to the new multiverse that finds itself in, and finding the perfect time and place to land within this new universe, 

The series of events leaves the child all alone as it crash lands on this new existence's equivalent to Earth sometime in the '90s, where this child would grow up and be unknowingly mostly raised by artificial hard hologram projections of his now long dead family, electronic ghosts if you will.

This is until April 13th 2009, 10 days after his birthday, and The date just so happens to be his cousin's birthday, as well as the release date of the newest big game that him, his cousin and their shared friend group have all been excited for, although come to find upon booting up his copy been trying to play with his cousin that his copy appears to be corrupted, Little did any of them know that This action and that this day would also mark the end of the world as they knew it in the beginning of an epic journey.


So yeah that's basically the synopsis of this idea I've had for a while for a Homestuck fan fiction type story thing, of course I don't own or created Homestuck but I really come to enjoy this idea and if and when I get around to make me the story a reality it would be strange but hopefully enjoyable with the protagonist being from a traditional comic universe I feel like some interesting elements could be added to the Homestuck story, hopefully one day I'll get around to town this story but till then this will have to suffice.


Think it goes without saying by the way, I don't own home stuck or anything like that This is just me posting an idea for a fanfiction alongside a mockup of the fan fictions potential logo which is made up of half of the official Homestuck logo which I also don't own

Sunday, April 23, 2023

The Handy Man from Timbuktu (character profile) (in need of rewrite and editing)

 



Born in Timbuktu to a African father and Indian traveler mother, from day one, it was clear that The Handy Man was a unique soul being super strong right out of the gate.

As he grew up He became more and more hairy until he resembled more of a kind of werewolf than he did a man, however despite this his parents and extended family still loved and cared for him, He even got a pet tiger from his mom's side of the family.

And despite the turmoil in his homeland he had a surprisingly healthy life growing up, although he did have to learn how to defend himself and his family from those who wish to take advantage and exploit them.

many people came seeking to capture this mythical "hairy man of Timbuktoo" as some sort of freak show act, or try to capture his parents or other family members to blackmail him into becoming a freak show act and every time this happened handyman would rush over alongside his pet tiger and using his insane strength and cleverness, would save the day.

But as the years went on, and these people became more and more relentless in their attempts to capture him, alongside having a vision in his dreams, He decided to leave for America.

this decision came to a shock to his parents and family and took some time for them to accept but they eventually got around to accepting it, and before leaving he moved his parents home to a place where the people trying to capture him would never look and find them.

also before he left handyman's father gifted him a very special club that had been passed down for generations that had a head that resembled a star, handy man's father went on to explain to him that he comes from a lineage of royalty and that club first belonged to one of there ancestors who some called the richest man in the world.

And so, after they said there good byes the handyman and his tiger began walking and walking and walking until they got to the coast were upon discovering that it would cost money to travel via boat the two decided to swim to America instead.

this is were the beginning of the original comic strip happens in my version of his story, with many comic strips from the original handyman run still transpiring in this timeline.

however eventually he decides to settle down somewhat and joins a circus that pays him well, treats him and his tiger well and gives him a home and at this circus he meets two other good natured strong men.

Hugo Hercules (soft spoken gentle Giant Melungeon strongman whose uncle is one of the people running the circus) and Samson the Strongman (hot tempered, heroic, competitive and Jewish with a bit of a Napoleon complex), together the three (and with his tiger technically making four) made sort of strongman group.

there act involved them showing off how strong they were while Also showing their personalities off in various different ways, sometimes even incorporating comedy, (sometimes intentionally through a routine and script and other times unintentionally due to fumbles or Hugo and Samson getting into bugs and daffy-esque disagreements That would eventually have to be broken up by the handyman), aswell as competitive tests of strength and wrestling, and even a kind of cultural education/exchange in the form of Them casually telling stories from the cultures they come from as they perform incredible feats of strength, All of this incorporated into their routine.

it is also at this circus the handyman got his name as the handyman, it being suggested by Hugo who thought that hairy man sounded a bit demeaning and that handyman fitted his friend better.

as time went on the three strongmen grew so close that they considered each other brothers And even After Hugo left the circus going his own way and Samson took over the big top for Hugo's uncle they all still cared for each other and still kept in touch, All three inviting each other to important events in their lives such as family gatherings, marriages, funerals and so on.

Samson even at one point called Hugo for help as the circus was in Florida and having trouble with some gentleman who kept "burning stuff and dressing like dumb ghosts to try and scare em", Samson thinking Hugo could help especially since becoming a part of that fancy hero team the Heroics, this eventually leading to the brothers having a reunion and alongside the Heroics facing off against the klan.

However that's a story for another day.

This story is a part of my own version of Handy man for my own projects and the Handy man originally created by Carl "Bunny" Schultze and info about the original comic strip can be found here and a decent chunk of his comic run can be found here in black and white.

(DISCLAIMER, THIS VERSION OF THE HANDYMAN FROM TIMBUKTU IS NOT IN THE PUBLIC DOMAIN AND IS SIGNIFICANTLY DIFFERENT FROM THE ORIGINAL VERSION WITH ADDED DETAILS NOT PRESENT IN THE PUBLIC DOMAIN INCARNATION OF THE CHARACTER)



Thursday, April 20, 2023

Her Highness #1: Fearsome Fightin' Froggy's

 Note: This is a script for a comic I've had lying around for quite some time, and I'm posting it to See what people think of it, I still want to do this as a series and have plenty of ideas just a matter of finding the time, energy, inspiration and so on, I hope you enjoy 


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Splash page


Setting: Elizabeth's living space and home base, it looks like an old Warehouse that has been retooled into an open studio style living space with various gadgets about, a workout space and boxing ring, as well as her wardrobe hung up all over the place.


Action: we see Elizabeth hiding behind a table looking prepared as a group of back lit shadowy figures approach her.


Caption: so there I am, in between a rock and assured doom by the hands of my greatest enemy, who am I you may ask, well I'm a lot of things, I'm beautiful, talented, gifted, gorgeous, kind and most definitely the world's greatest detective, although some may argue that last point, looking at you dad, none can argue that I haven't stopped evil more times than I can count and all while looking impeccably good. But look at me go, talking about who I am before I've even introduced myself, well my name is Elizabeth, but you may refer to me as.


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Splash page


Caption: HER HIGHNESS, The Fabulous femme fatale who's smart enough to figure out and foil any sinful scheme or putrid plot cooked up by her cavalcade of crooks and creeps.


Action: this page shows our heroine in her full glory, standing triumphant as she confronts the advancing villainous shadows.


Caption: and the vile villain I'm currently dealing with is none other than the dastardly doctor of masculine dominance, supremacy and manipulation.


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Splash page


Dr bangle: IT IS I DOCTOR BANGLE FURTER, and I have come with my battalion of frog men from under the sea to finally do away with you miss lowness and take over Fornia, and soon after the world, ridding it of the feminine virus once and for all.


Action: we see now the flamboyant doctor in all his glory from the front at a partial angle as his ugly mug Lear's towards the reader as he does a pose as if he saying "come at me", his arms stretched out and chest puffed out, legs in a stepping position as he stands atop a platform being carried by his frogmen.


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Elizabeth: not if I have anything to say about it you sour sausage.


Action: we see Elizabeth, her finger pointing up at the doctor, the other hand held close to her chest balled up in a fist and standing proud.


Panel2

Furter: dear girl, I'm not sure you'll have the lung capacity to say anything soon.


Action: furter makes a face as if he's talking to a baby, lips puckered and eyes wide as he cocks his head and clasps his hands together and sets them on his cheek like he's looking at something precious.


Panel3

Furter: FROG GUARDS, SPEAR HERRRRRR… um, THROUGH THE LUNGS.


Action: furter is in a absolutely bombastic pose, pointing at Liz his face absolutely gleaming with malevolent Joy, flamboyantly intimidating.


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Action: the frogmen Begin their attack as two of the imposing and muscular figures with their spears dwarf the small shadowed out Elizabeth, her standing in a martial arts stance, clearly prepared for the man walls approaching her.


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Action: the frogmen launch their attack trying to spear liz.


Panel2-3

Action: expertly she stands in-between the spear strikes having her arms crossed in a way that resembles how folks in coffins often have their arms crossed, she then unleashes two strong chops, breaking the spears as she does so, us seeing her after images, almost as if she's pulling something off from fist of the north star.


Panel4

Action: she then jumps on top of one of the frog men's heads and jumps off his head at the devilish doctor, leaving after images as she goes.


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Panel1

Action: how ever she flies through the dastardly doctor.


Panel2

Action: we see furter who's now very obviously a hologram looking over his shoulder menacingly.


Furter: oh my dear blunderer, did you really think I'd be dumb enough to come in person after last time.


Panel3

Action: we see Liz action pointing at the bad doctor.


Elizabeth: you fab fiend, where are you hiding.


Panel4

Action: we see the maniacal mug of the good doctor as his face seems to be monstrous and heavily shadowed.


Furter: like I'd tell you, you meddlesome Miss.


Panel5

Action: the doctor claps his hands together and seems to send the darkness away as he does a joyful but definitely manic expression.


Furter: instead, 


Panel6

Action: furter is now turning away from the camera off-handedly waving one of his hands goodbye to his adversary 


Furter: I'll leave you to deal with the rest of my boys here, toodaloo.


Panel7

Action: the doctors hologram dissipates and turns off.


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Panel1

Action: the frogmen Begin there second attack with a fierce REEEE as the group encircles and closes in on our hero as she stands in a action pose.


Panel2

Action: with a chop to the head, Liz dispatches one.


Panel3 

Action: with a punch to the gut she knocks down another.


Panel4

Action: 2 of the other bruts charge the comparatively minuscule hero.


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Panel1

Action: our hero stands in a wrestler or grappler's stance arms at the ready to grab her opponent.


Panel2

Action: she quickly puts one in a headlock and kicks the other.


Panel3

Action: she then tosses over the frog she has held, using his own weight and momentum against him.


Panel4

Elizabeth: sorry boys, but this isn't my first rodeo, or should I say TOADEO.


Action: she says this with a smirk.


Panel5

Elizabeth: hehehe.


Action: but as she gloats and snickers three more frogmen sneak up behind her starkly and in an intimidating shadow spears apparent.


Pg9


Panel1

Action: the frogmen Begin their attack quickly catching Her Highness off guard and are aiming their spears for her back, Elizabeth's head is half way turned seeing this and a expression of surprise is on her face.


Panel2

Action: she quickly turns around, puffs her chest out like superman.


Panel3 

Action: the spears break apart against her boobs.


Panel4

Action: the frog men are visibly shocked and confused as they look at there now broken Spears.


Panel5

Action: Liz responding smirks


Elizabeth: alright then, who's next to dance with the queen of this castle.


Pg10


Panel1

Action: the frogmen tackle Elizabeth to the ground.


Panel2

Action: a struggle ensues.


Panel3

Action: but as she struggles against the amphibian aggressors Liz notices something.


Panel4

Action: there's a small electronic device on the back of one of the frogman's necks.


Panel5

Action: quickly she gets a look of determination on her face.


Panel6

Action: with Herculean strength she tosses the frogmen off of her and breaks out of the tackle.


Pg11


Panel1 

Action: Elizabeth quickly the grabs small device on the frogman.


Panel2

Action: she rips it off with sparks flying out of it, the sparks following the ark of her arm as she rips it out. 


Panel3

Action: the frogman violently recoils back.


Panel4

Action: the frogman begins to violently spasm and shake on the floor.


Panel5

Action: quickly Liz does the same to the other frogmen and they fall.


Panel6

Action: the frogmen's bodies begin changing and morphing as they seizure on the floor.


Pg12


Panel1

Action: the frogmen lie still on the floor having shrunk and become less monstrous and rippling as Elizabeth stands prepared for anything.


Panel2

Action: slowly the frog men Begin getting up.


Panel3

Action: one of the frog men with a hand to his head and one eye closed clearly having some sort of headache as his face is contorted into a grimace.


Frodon: where are we? And who in the name of Poseidon are you.


Panel4

Action: we see Liz talking to the frog man from over her shoulder as she is more fixated on the thing she is holding.


Elizabeth: my name is Her Highness but friends call me liz,


Panel5

Action: we see Elizabeth's hand holding one of the devices that was on the frogman and we get a better look at the strange electronic with it's red light and chrome finish.


Elizabeth: so, it would appear that that garish goon had mind controlled you and your country men with these devices.


Panel6-8

Action: we see frodon slowly regaining his faculties with his pained grimace transforming into a righteous fury as the hand on his head lowers into a clenched fist of rage.


Frodon: mind controlled?, oh, that, that BASTARD.


Panel9

Action: Elizabeth has turned around to face the frogman and is sitting on a chair.


Elizabeth: Am I correct in my assumption and more importantly for this conversation to continue, who are you dear?


Pg13


Panel1

Action: we see the disembodied head of prince frodon over the first of these panels which shows a shot of the kingdom of Frellwater with a blueish green tint to it.


Frodon: I am prince Frodon of the kingdom of Frellwater, home of the amphibinoid empire,


Panel2

Action: we see the amphibinoids living peacefully in there under sea society


Frodon: for a time we had lived in peace from the surface dwellers and their chaos and wars, 


Panel3

Action: we see the same scene as before but now chaos has erupted and the bluish green tint is replaced with a orange one as robotic looking armored men are attacking the civilians and descending on the city, and yes, their armor has nipples


Frodon: but recently our peace had come to an end, 


Panel4

Action: we see the kingdom literally in the shadowed out form of Dr bangle furter as he maniacally smiles and looks at the defenseless Kingdom as havoc continues being wrecked with explosions and small black figures flying or swimming around it, in the bottom left corner we see another disembodied head of frodon and in the bottom right is Elizabeths.


Frodon: our home invaded by an overwhelming Force and my people enslaved, completely under his control


Elizabeth: that sounds horrific…


Pg14


Panel1-3

Action: we see the prince head held down clearly depressed and saddened and one hand at a time he begins to cradle his head out of shame and sadness as his fellow frogmen come to comfort him.


Frodon: of course the Royal family including me my brothers and my fathers fought against the imposing tyranny but, sigh, we failed, we failed our people, we failed our home and I failed everyone.


Panel4

Action: we are now looking over Frodon's shoulder at Elizabeth as she's perked up on her chair.


Elizabeth: Wait, your Fathers?


Panel5

Action: we see frodon looking back at Elizabeth and now we're looking at him from over Elizabeth's shoulder as his hand is turned over and palm exposed as he explains.


Frodon: yes, my species is, what do you surface dwellers call it, we're, Hermaphroditic?, I do hope I'm using the right word.


Pg15


Panel1

Action: we see Liz sitting legs crossed and with her hand on her jaw in the thinker position.


Elizabeth: So you can reproduce without females…, hmmm, well that answers why that homosexual horror enslaved you.


Panel2

Action: frodon as well as the other frog men are visibly confused.


Elizabeth: I reckon by his standards your probably the closest thing to perfection that he didn't create


Frodon: homosexual horror? What is homosexual?


Panel3

Action: Elizabeth stands up and strikes a pose.


Elizabeth: no time to sit here and explain, we gotta get going and find my colonizing combatant and stop his putrid plans for pilfering and power.


Panel4

Action: Elizabeth starts making her way to the door.


Elizabeth: come with me, will take my car.


Panel5-6

Action: Elizabeth stops and turns back around to the frogmen.


Elizabeth: but first.


Pg16


Panel1

Action: we see her saying this in a small close up panel in the upper left hand corner of the page.


Elizabeth: Do you gentlemen have any memories of when you were mind controlled and where my manicured menace is, also what kind of music do you enjoy?


Panel2

caption: later


Action: in the center big panel is a shot of her car, a tricked out Cadillac with all the fixings, like a flamboyant batmobile driving down a sunny 70s California street as the frog folk are in her passenger seats.


Frodon: and that's what I can remember.


Pg17


Panel1-4

Action: we see the chariot (Elizabeth's car) as Elizabeth is talking and driving all around the city streets doing incredible things like extending its Wheels to drive over cars without damaging them, bouncing over construction work and even speeding at almost impossible speeds.


Elizabeth: interesting, so he's set up in your royal palace, well from that I have a good idea where the melodramatic madman is, and potentially what he may be planning.


Pg18


Panel1

Action: the car quickly drifts and screeches to a halt as Elizabeth turns it to face a street heading into a dock at its end.


Panel2

Action: Elizabeth turns to her passengers as we are looking from the back of the car at her in front of her being the street that ends with a dock clearly visible.


Elizabeth: gentleman, make sure your buckled up and holding on tight, the trip is about to get really bumpy for a second or two.


Pg19


Panel1

Action: the car begins to reve in place as it burns out.


Panel2

Action: Prince Frodon clearly concerned with one finger raised and overall just posed in a reserved and definitively worried.


Frodon: mis highness, what are you doing.


Panel3

Action: we see Liz with both hands on the wheel and a clear bit of manic joy and energy behind her eyes as she's very clearly eyeing up the runway she has.


Elizabeth: adding a bit of flair darling, and you can call me liz.


Panel4-7

Action: quickly Elizabeth stops burning out having formed a huge pink smoke cloud around her car and quickly accelerates towards the docks out of a pink cloud and speedily then onto the docks without stopping.


Pg20


Panel1

Action: Full page spread of the chariot flying off the end of the dock, it soaring in the sky as frodon and co look shocked and Elizabeth seems relatively calm as they head for the water.


Elizabeth: YEEEE HAAAAAA.


Caption: have I lost my head, will our heroes survive a salty dip in the sea, will the devilish doctor archive his vicious victory, come back next time to find out in the next fab issue of HER HIGHNESS.



Note: Also just so I don't forget I did draw up some designs for the costumes of Liz and Furter which are right here although I would like to mention that I imagine Furter wearing a domino mask





At one point I was working with a friend to develop this idea further and eventually get it drawn, but do to life stuff we lost touch and at this point it would feel awkward to try and re connect as there was some drama with some people and im led to believe there was a rather large kerfuffle, and I rather not accidentally open up old wounds



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