Note: This is a script for a comic I've had lying around for quite some time, and I'm posting it to See what people think of it, I still want to do this as a series and have plenty of ideas just a matter of finding the time, energy, inspiration and so on, I hope you enjoy
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Splash page
Setting: Elizabeth's living space and home base, it looks like an old Warehouse that has been retooled into an open studio style living space with various gadgets about, a workout space and boxing ring, as well as her wardrobe hung up all over the place.
Action: we see Elizabeth hiding behind a table looking prepared as a group of back lit shadowy figures approach her.
Caption: so there I am, in between a rock and assured doom by the hands of my greatest enemy, who am I you may ask, well I'm a lot of things, I'm beautiful, talented, gifted, gorgeous, kind and most definitely the world's greatest detective, although some may argue that last point, looking at you dad, none can argue that I haven't stopped evil more times than I can count and all while looking impeccably good. But look at me go, talking about who I am before I've even introduced myself, well my name is Elizabeth, but you may refer to me as.
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Splash page
Caption: HER HIGHNESS, The Fabulous femme fatale who's smart enough to figure out and foil any sinful scheme or putrid plot cooked up by her cavalcade of crooks and creeps.
Action: this page shows our heroine in her full glory, standing triumphant as she confronts the advancing villainous shadows.
Caption: and the vile villain I'm currently dealing with is none other than the dastardly doctor of masculine dominance, supremacy and manipulation.
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Splash page
Dr bangle: IT IS I DOCTOR BANGLE FURTER, and I have come with my battalion of frog men from under the sea to finally do away with you miss lowness and take over Fornia, and soon after the world, ridding it of the feminine virus once and for all.
Action: we see now the flamboyant doctor in all his glory from the front at a partial angle as his ugly mug Lear's towards the reader as he does a pose as if he saying "come at me", his arms stretched out and chest puffed out, legs in a stepping position as he stands atop a platform being carried by his frogmen.
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Elizabeth: not if I have anything to say about it you sour sausage.
Action: we see Elizabeth, her finger pointing up at the doctor, the other hand held close to her chest balled up in a fist and standing proud.
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Furter: dear girl, I'm not sure you'll have the lung capacity to say anything soon.
Action: furter makes a face as if he's talking to a baby, lips puckered and eyes wide as he cocks his head and clasps his hands together and sets them on his cheek like he's looking at something precious.
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Furter: FROG GUARDS, SPEAR HERRRRRR… um, THROUGH THE LUNGS.
Action: furter is in a absolutely bombastic pose, pointing at Liz his face absolutely gleaming with malevolent Joy, flamboyantly intimidating.
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Action: the frogmen Begin their attack as two of the imposing and muscular figures with their spears dwarf the small shadowed out Elizabeth, her standing in a martial arts stance, clearly prepared for the man walls approaching her.
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Action: the frogmen launch their attack trying to spear liz.
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Action: expertly she stands in-between the spear strikes having her arms crossed in a way that resembles how folks in coffins often have their arms crossed, she then unleashes two strong chops, breaking the spears as she does so, us seeing her after images, almost as if she's pulling something off from fist of the north star.
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Action: she then jumps on top of one of the frog men's heads and jumps off his head at the devilish doctor, leaving after images as she goes.
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Panel1
Action: how ever she flies through the dastardly doctor.
Panel2
Action: we see furter who's now very obviously a hologram looking over his shoulder menacingly.
Furter: oh my dear blunderer, did you really think I'd be dumb enough to come in person after last time.
Panel3
Action: we see Liz action pointing at the bad doctor.
Elizabeth: you fab fiend, where are you hiding.
Panel4
Action: we see the maniacal mug of the good doctor as his face seems to be monstrous and heavily shadowed.
Furter: like I'd tell you, you meddlesome Miss.
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Action: the doctor claps his hands together and seems to send the darkness away as he does a joyful but definitely manic expression.
Furter: instead,
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Action: furter is now turning away from the camera off-handedly waving one of his hands goodbye to his adversary
Furter: I'll leave you to deal with the rest of my boys here, toodaloo.
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Action: the doctors hologram dissipates and turns off.
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Panel1
Action: the frogmen Begin there second attack with a fierce REEEE as the group encircles and closes in on our hero as she stands in a action pose.
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Action: with a chop to the head, Liz dispatches one.
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Action: with a punch to the gut she knocks down another.
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Action: 2 of the other bruts charge the comparatively minuscule hero.
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Panel1
Action: our hero stands in a wrestler or grappler's stance arms at the ready to grab her opponent.
Panel2
Action: she quickly puts one in a headlock and kicks the other.
Panel3
Action: she then tosses over the frog she has held, using his own weight and momentum against him.
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Elizabeth: sorry boys, but this isn't my first rodeo, or should I say TOADEO.
Action: she says this with a smirk.
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Elizabeth: hehehe.
Action: but as she gloats and snickers three more frogmen sneak up behind her starkly and in an intimidating shadow spears apparent.
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Panel1
Action: the frogmen Begin their attack quickly catching Her Highness off guard and are aiming their spears for her back, Elizabeth's head is half way turned seeing this and a expression of surprise is on her face.
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Action: she quickly turns around, puffs her chest out like superman.
Panel3
Action: the spears break apart against her boobs.
Panel4
Action: the frog men are visibly shocked and confused as they look at there now broken Spears.
Panel5
Action: Liz responding smirks
Elizabeth: alright then, who's next to dance with the queen of this castle.
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Panel1
Action: the frogmen tackle Elizabeth to the ground.
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Action: a struggle ensues.
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Action: but as she struggles against the amphibian aggressors Liz notices something.
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Action: there's a small electronic device on the back of one of the frogman's necks.
Panel5
Action: quickly she gets a look of determination on her face.
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Action: with Herculean strength she tosses the frogmen off of her and breaks out of the tackle.
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Panel1
Action: Elizabeth quickly the grabs small device on the frogman.
Panel2
Action: she rips it off with sparks flying out of it, the sparks following the ark of her arm as she rips it out.
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Action: the frogman violently recoils back.
Panel4
Action: the frogman begins to violently spasm and shake on the floor.
Panel5
Action: quickly Liz does the same to the other frogmen and they fall.
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Action: the frogmen's bodies begin changing and morphing as they seizure on the floor.
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Panel1
Action: the frogmen lie still on the floor having shrunk and become less monstrous and rippling as Elizabeth stands prepared for anything.
Panel2
Action: slowly the frog men Begin getting up.
Panel3
Action: one of the frog men with a hand to his head and one eye closed clearly having some sort of headache as his face is contorted into a grimace.
Frodon: where are we? And who in the name of Poseidon are you.
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Action: we see Liz talking to the frog man from over her shoulder as she is more fixated on the thing she is holding.
Elizabeth: my name is Her Highness but friends call me liz,
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Action: we see Elizabeth's hand holding one of the devices that was on the frogman and we get a better look at the strange electronic with it's red light and chrome finish.
Elizabeth: so, it would appear that that garish goon had mind controlled you and your country men with these devices.
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Action: we see frodon slowly regaining his faculties with his pained grimace transforming into a righteous fury as the hand on his head lowers into a clenched fist of rage.
Frodon: mind controlled?, oh, that, that BASTARD.
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Action: Elizabeth has turned around to face the frogman and is sitting on a chair.
Elizabeth: Am I correct in my assumption and more importantly for this conversation to continue, who are you dear?
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Action: we see the disembodied head of prince frodon over the first of these panels which shows a shot of the kingdom of Frellwater with a blueish green tint to it.
Frodon: I am prince Frodon of the kingdom of Frellwater, home of the amphibinoid empire,
Panel2
Action: we see the amphibinoids living peacefully in there under sea society
Frodon: for a time we had lived in peace from the surface dwellers and their chaos and wars,
Panel3
Action: we see the same scene as before but now chaos has erupted and the bluish green tint is replaced with a orange one as robotic looking armored men are attacking the civilians and descending on the city, and yes, their armor has nipples
Frodon: but recently our peace had come to an end,
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Action: we see the kingdom literally in the shadowed out form of Dr bangle furter as he maniacally smiles and looks at the defenseless Kingdom as havoc continues being wrecked with explosions and small black figures flying or swimming around it, in the bottom left corner we see another disembodied head of frodon and in the bottom right is Elizabeths.
Frodon: our home invaded by an overwhelming Force and my people enslaved, completely under his control
Elizabeth: that sounds horrific…
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Panel1-3
Action: we see the prince head held down clearly depressed and saddened and one hand at a time he begins to cradle his head out of shame and sadness as his fellow frogmen come to comfort him.
Frodon: of course the Royal family including me my brothers and my fathers fought against the imposing tyranny but, sigh, we failed, we failed our people, we failed our home and I failed everyone.
Panel4
Action: we are now looking over Frodon's shoulder at Elizabeth as she's perked up on her chair.
Elizabeth: Wait, your Fathers?
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Action: we see frodon looking back at Elizabeth and now we're looking at him from over Elizabeth's shoulder as his hand is turned over and palm exposed as he explains.
Frodon: yes, my species is, what do you surface dwellers call it, we're, Hermaphroditic?, I do hope I'm using the right word.
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Panel1
Action: we see Liz sitting legs crossed and with her hand on her jaw in the thinker position.
Elizabeth: So you can reproduce without females…, hmmm, well that answers why that homosexual horror enslaved you.
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Action: frodon as well as the other frog men are visibly confused.
Elizabeth: I reckon by his standards your probably the closest thing to perfection that he didn't create
Frodon: homosexual horror? What is homosexual?
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Action: Elizabeth stands up and strikes a pose.
Elizabeth: no time to sit here and explain, we gotta get going and find my colonizing combatant and stop his putrid plans for pilfering and power.
Panel4
Action: Elizabeth starts making her way to the door.
Elizabeth: come with me, will take my car.
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Action: Elizabeth stops and turns back around to the frogmen.
Elizabeth: but first.
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Panel1
Action: we see her saying this in a small close up panel in the upper left hand corner of the page.
Elizabeth: Do you gentlemen have any memories of when you were mind controlled and where my manicured menace is, also what kind of music do you enjoy?
Panel2
caption: later
Action: in the center big panel is a shot of her car, a tricked out Cadillac with all the fixings, like a flamboyant batmobile driving down a sunny 70s California street as the frog folk are in her passenger seats.
Frodon: and that's what I can remember.
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Panel1-4
Action: we see the chariot (Elizabeth's car) as Elizabeth is talking and driving all around the city streets doing incredible things like extending its Wheels to drive over cars without damaging them, bouncing over construction work and even speeding at almost impossible speeds.
Elizabeth: interesting, so he's set up in your royal palace, well from that I have a good idea where the melodramatic madman is, and potentially what he may be planning.
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Action: the car quickly drifts and screeches to a halt as Elizabeth turns it to face a street heading into a dock at its end.
Panel2
Action: Elizabeth turns to her passengers as we are looking from the back of the car at her in front of her being the street that ends with a dock clearly visible.
Elizabeth: gentleman, make sure your buckled up and holding on tight, the trip is about to get really bumpy for a second or two.
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Panel1
Action: the car begins to reve in place as it burns out.
Panel2
Action: Prince Frodon clearly concerned with one finger raised and overall just posed in a reserved and definitively worried.
Frodon: mis highness, what are you doing.
Panel3
Action: we see Liz with both hands on the wheel and a clear bit of manic joy and energy behind her eyes as she's very clearly eyeing up the runway she has.
Elizabeth: adding a bit of flair darling, and you can call me liz.
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Action: quickly Elizabeth stops burning out having formed a huge pink smoke cloud around her car and quickly accelerates towards the docks out of a pink cloud and speedily then onto the docks without stopping.
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Action: Full page spread of the chariot flying off the end of the dock, it soaring in the sky as frodon and co look shocked and Elizabeth seems relatively calm as they head for the water.
Elizabeth: YEEEE HAAAAAA.
Caption: have I lost my head, will our heroes survive a salty dip in the sea, will the devilish doctor archive his vicious victory, come back next time to find out in the next fab issue of HER HIGHNESS.
Note: Also just so I don't forget I did draw up some designs for the costumes of Liz and Furter which are right here although I would like to mention that I imagine Furter wearing a domino mask
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